Original Description:
The crystal longhouse sits atop the building. Next to skyward pointing pipes it keeps fragile life warm at a frigid height.
The Sad Version:
The crystal home sits lonely atop the world. The glass womb struggling to keep fragile life warm at a frigid height.
The Happy Version:
High aloft, ruling all the world from its perch, the glittering house is a warm bastion on a cold day. This wiser Icarus basks in the sun, living brightly.
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1 comment:
Pretty good Patty Ray. Was the description purposefully poetic? It sounded great. I like how the description and the sad poem were phased so similarly. Interesting.
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